This is my favourite piece of work, from Fish In A Tree, called the S.S. Enterprise. I reckon I did a good job. I like how I made the flames look sort of realistic and put every detail I could see on it. The Star ship Enterprise fits into the story because of Albert's flint top. Flint is the person who steered the S.S. Enterprise in Star Trek.
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Wednesday, 19 June 2019
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Hello it's Ailie and I like how the flames have both colours. You may find next time you do somethin like his you can add some bits and bobs to the side of the white disc, maybe some blue, red or black dots to look like buttons lighting up! It does look like you put quite a bit of effort into it so keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ailie It's Giorgio, thanks for the idea to put bits and bobs around the side and I will keep up the good work.
DeleteGreetings Giorgio Its Jackson and great S.S enterprise you did make those flames realistic. yes Flint was a man that flew the S.S enterprise
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Jackson
Great work Giorgio. I also really like the flames coming out the back.
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