Today we learnt about very short sentences. A very short sentence is a sentence with at least two words and a maximum of five. Our task is to write a paragraph with at least one very short, one -ing start and one adverb start sentence.
In a world where plants lived, was mushy and his little brothers (who were twins)
Om and Ro Ro. Surprisingly, Mushy was capable of taking care of the twins without there mum and dad. Today Mushy had finished his book called The Mush Rooms. Quietening the twins was never easy, but Mushy had his ways since they were so gullible and inquisitive "Room, room there is something over here come look." Dropping what they were doing the twins sprinted over and sat on a root waiting for Mushy. Mushy read the book while sneaking up behind the twins. After about ten minutes the twins were asleep. Mushy put the twins on his head and started climbing up a tree so they were no hit in the tree stampede. Mushy took the twins off his head sat on a good branch and went to sleep. That morning they woke up and saw a unexpected surprise. There parents were...
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