I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
This is cute! I love the animals you have chosen (probably because some of them are my favourites - especially the baby sloth!). I wonder if you could add to your zoo by including links to some videos of some of the animals in action, or by including some sign posts to show people around the zoo. I like the way you have made the paths and enclosures too.
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Awww so cute love all the animals you used.:)
ReplyDeleteThis is cute! I love the animals you have chosen (probably because some of them are my favourites - especially the baby sloth!). I wonder if you could add to your zoo by including links to some videos of some of the animals in action, or by including some sign posts to show people around the zoo. I like the way you have made the paths and enclosures too.
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