Seeing My Nephew Again
On Sunday we meet my nephew (who I haven't seen for around half a year) at Bounce. His name is Jake and he has changed heaps since I last saw him. He can talk a lot more now and is much faster. At Bounce, the main thing we did was going down slides. At 11:30 me and my brother Louis did some rock climbing which was really fun. When we finished that, we went and played with Jake again back on the slides. After a bit we started playing hide 'n' seek. It was super funny because sometimes we had to pretend to not see Jake. It was really cute when he counted to ten and came found me or my brother. After that we went on the tramps. Me and Louis played ball tag but that didn't last long. Then back on the slides and at the end was the worst part. When we were leaving we said good bye and then Jake started balling his eyes out. It was so sad. So we said good bye one more time and then went home.
I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tuesday, 29 October 2019
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Aww sad, at least you had a good time I don't see anything wrong with the writing - Lilley
ReplyDeleteHi Giorgio, Jake sounds really cute. I found a sentence that didn't make sense though. But overall it was a great blog post.
ReplyDeleteYour blog was interesting and very informational!
ReplyDeleteGood job😀👍